The Bird Did Not Fly
By Tuesday morning, the cage had learned my name. It said it softly, in Ma’s voice, from the kitchen window where the caged parrot hung beside the basil. I had returned after twelve years, with a suitcase and no husband, which in our lane was worse than arriving with a corpse. Ma made tea. The parrot scraped its beak against the brass bars. “You can sleep in your old room,” she said, as if mercy had furniture. I opened the window. Outside, the night jasmine leaned in, reckless, fragrant, almost free. And the faint perfume from its chalice steals— into the room, into the cage, into my lungs. The bird did not fly when I opened the latch. Neither did I. We only looked at each other, ashamed of our training.
~ Oizys.
Word count: 131
Written for dVerse Prosery — Paul Laurence Dunbar, hosted by Dora on May 11, 2026. The prompt asked us to write a piece of prose fiction in 144 words or fewer, using the line from Dunbar’s Sympathy: “And the faint perfume from its chalice steals—” This is fiction. Mostly. The cage is innocent until proven hereditary.
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[dVerse] May 11th - The Bird Did Not Fly
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Amazingly good. The prompt line blended in seamlessly and the storytelling was immaculate. I liked the set up, the barbed humor of the protagonist and the wry diction ("as if mercy had furniture"). And who doesn't know the heavy resignation of settling for the "cage," however temporary?! Very nicely done, Oizys.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Dora. I loved the prompt line, and I am so glad it settled naturally into the piece. “As if mercy had furniture” was one of those lines that arrived already carrying its own chair. And yes, the cage [temporary or not... um, definitely NOT in my case... haha] has a terrible way of becoming familiar. Thank you for this generous reading.
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