NaPoWriMo 2026 [April 24]
Day Twenty-Four
We’ve made it to the final Friday of National/Global Poetry Writing Month 2026, everyone!
Today’s featured participant is Poem Dive, where you’ll find a rather heavy response to Day 23’s villanelle prompt, but one that showcases a particular quality of the form — in deft hands, the repeated lines can have a sort of dolorous, bell-like quality, as the poem were tolling its refrains.
Our resource today is this curated selection of letters written by the English poet Gerard Manley Hopkins, in which he explains aspects of his thinking about poetry.
Finally, here is our (optional) prompt for the day! In her poem, “The Flying Nightdress,” Mandakranta Sen describes something fantastical and strange that occurs while the rest of the world is asleep. The imagery of the poem is dreamlike, but the situation it describes is otherwise presented quite straightforwardly. Today, we challenge you to write your own poem that takes place at night, and describes something magical or strange that happens but that no one is awake (or around) to notice.
Happy writing!
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Night Shift
At night, when no one was awake to accuse the world of anything.
A spoon bends toward the moon.
A towel remembers the body.
A closed laptop keeps typing my unsent thoughts.
The office chairs rearrange themselves according to who suffered most that day.
My unread emails grow teeth.
The cursor blinks like a small, unpaid ghost.
Somewhere, a map quietly changes its mind.
A yellow line eats its way inland.
A border rinses its hands in the dark.
After midnight, the room began returning everything I had swallowed.
While I sleep, my body holds a meeting without me.
While I sleep, my stomach lights a small fire and reads old insults aloud.
My ribs shift furniture.
My skin sheds one invisible version of me.
On the balcony, the plants whisper in my mother tongue.
A cup of water grows a tiny moon.
My blanket rises like a hill and shelters all the tired women you have been.
No one sees any of this.
By morning, even the magic has folded itself away.
My mother slowly wakes up and turns the night into yet another morning of labour.
~ Oizys.
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Note: As Israel occupies Lebanon with its “yellow line,” I wanted the poem to carry, without naming too much, the way a border is used to carve a wound in the dark. Slow Factory Super Fund for Lebanon: An urgent fundraiser supporting families in Lebanon affected by ongoing bombardment and displacement, with donations distributed directly for immediate shelter and food needs. Good night.
I wish you and all you country folk all safety and peace. And I very much appreciate the moving and thought-provoking way you illuminate the moment.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Carol. Your words mean a great deal. It has been a heavy time for all the occupied people, and I am grateful that the poem could carry even a little of that moment with care for those.
DeleteVery powerful. Your writing is rich, dense, original and imaginative.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. That means a lot... especially for this poem. I am grateful you spent time with it.
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