NaPoWriMo 2026 [April 16]
Day Sixteen
Happy sixteenth day of National/Global Poetry Writing month, everyone!
Our featured daily participant is klara laurenzia linden, who brings us a bilingual response to Day Fifteen’s unusual-love-poem challenge.
Today’s resource is Copper Canyon Press’s “Line/Break” interview series, which brings you half-hour-ish episodes featuring eight contemporary poets.
And last but not least, here’s today’s optional prompt. In “Ocean,” Robinson Jeffers delivers an almost oracular, scriptural description of the sea not just as a geographical phenomenon, but a sort of being – old, wise, profound, and able to teach those who want to learn. Today, try writing a poem in which you describe something that cannot speak, and what it has taught or told you.
Happy writing!
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What the half-room refused to say
The room is not whole.
it has been decided for me.
a line exists,
drawn,
enforced:
by cupboard edge,
by shared wall,
by divided bed,
by the way voices travel
only one direction.
my half
learns the discipline of shrinking.
the bed knows how to fold itself
into apology.
the desk keeps its elbows in.
even the window
opens like a compromise,
never fully,
just enough to prove air exists.
nothing here belongs without permission.
the other half:
i do not name it.
i cannot.
i do not have the right.
naming gives it symmetry.
it does not deserve that.
it spills:
light, instructions, inherited noise,
the clatter of a life
that assumes its right to be loud.
my half learns silence
like a second language.
there are nights
when the wall breathes differently.
not alive,
even slightly, but
just aware
of how thin it is.
i have measured that thinness
with my back,
with my listening,
with the way my thoughts
stop mid-sentence.
this room has taught me
how division becomes etiquette.
how you can live entire years
on the smaller side of a decision
you did not make.
how space is not architecture
of autonomy
it is the benevolence
of their permission.
and permission,
like everything else here,
is rationed.
still,
nothing breaks.
not the wall,
not the line,
not the borders,
not the partition,
not the boundary,
not the careful choreography
of staying inside what is mine
only because it was left over.
the room says nothing.
but every day
it rearranges me
into halves
into smaller obediences
and develops,
then quieter partitions
then smaller territories
then enclaves
that do not argue anymore.
~ Oizys.
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A gem.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Elizabeth.
Deletethis line, yeah, so impactful
ReplyDelete"how space is not architecture
of autonomy
it is the benevolence
of their permission."
Thank you, Michelle. I think so much of the violence in these structures hides behind the language of care, provision, and permission... as though constrained space should be received as kindness. I wanted that moment to name the difference between being allowed and being free.
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