Last but not least, here’s today’s (optional) prompt. In her poem, “Living with a Painting,” Denise Levertov describes just that. And well, that’s a pretty universal experience, isn’t it? It’s the rare human structure – be it a bedroom, kitchen, dentist’s office, or classroom – that doesn’t have art on its walls, even if it’s only the photos on a calendar. Today, we’d like to challenge you to write your own poem about living with a piece of art.
[I wrote two poems.]
# Under the Gaze of Blue
Each morning,
I wake to the silent gaze
of the woman in the painting,
her eyes a deep, unfathomable blue,
like the sky just before dusk.
She does not speak,
yet her stillness fills the room,
whispers of untold stories
hanging in the quiet air.
I wonder what she knows—
does she ever tire of the frame that confines her?
Does she long for the brushstrokes of time,
the movement of a world beyond her borders?
Perhaps she is content,
anchored in this corner,
offering her gaze as a quiet companion
to the noise of my morning.
The light shifts,
and she changes with it—
now warm, now cool,
her face caught between shadows
and the stretch of the day.
I leave her each time I step out,
but when I return, she is always there,
waiting,
as if nothing has changed
except the passing of light,
the turning of hours,
and my own quiet passage through her world.
# The Portrait Above the Sink
It’s a woman in a bonnet,
her eyes too soft to see the dishes,
but they do, somehow—
like ghosts in the mist of morning steam.
I don’t know who she is.
Maybe she’s the ghost
of all the lost mothers whose hands
never stopped scrubbing.
Maybe she’s the wind,
a hurricane that swept through her hair,
wild and uncut.
Maybe she’s me, in ten years,
looking at the faucet,
wondering how the water got so brown.
I live with her now,
her face a quiet hum behind my shoulder
while I dig for last night's spoon.
We’ve both seen the same kitchen
too many times—
her, locked in paint,
me, dragging my body
through the same repetitive motions
of pouring cereal,
scraping the pan,
scrubbing the counters
as though nothing changes,
but her eyes—
they always remind me
that something else might.
Each morning,
I wake to the silent gaze
of the woman in the painting,
her eyes a deep, unfathomable blue,
like the sky just before dusk.
She does not speak,
yet her stillness fills the room,
whispers of untold stories
hanging in the quiet air.
I wonder what she knows—
does she ever tire of the frame that confines her?
Does she long for the brushstrokes of time,
the movement of a world beyond her borders?
Perhaps she is content,
anchored in this corner,
offering her gaze as a quiet companion
to the noise of my morning.
The light shifts,
and she changes with it—
now warm, now cool,
her face caught between shadows
and the stretch of the day.
I leave her each time I step out,
but when I return, she is always there,
waiting,
as if nothing has changed
except the passing of light,
the turning of hours,
and my own quiet passage through her world.
# The Portrait Above the Sink
It’s a woman in a bonnet,
her eyes too soft to see the dishes,
but they do, somehow—
like ghosts in the mist of morning steam.
I don’t know who she is.
Maybe she’s the ghost
of all the lost mothers whose hands
never stopped scrubbing.
Maybe she’s the wind,
a hurricane that swept through her hair,
wild and uncut.
Maybe she’s me, in ten years,
looking at the faucet,
wondering how the water got so brown.
I live with her now,
her face a quiet hum behind my shoulder
while I dig for last night's spoon.
We’ve both seen the same kitchen
too many times—
her, locked in paint,
me, dragging my body
through the same repetitive motions
of pouring cereal,
scraping the pan,
scrubbing the counters
as though nothing changes,
but her eyes—
they always remind me
that something else might.
- Oizys.
I'm contemplating on how to get started here, and you wrote two already. Oh my... and they're both wonderful. Can't say which "painting" I like better, but yeah, both of the poems are stupendous. Those women have stories to tell... I like it so much. Thanks for sharing these. Bless you.
ReplyDeleteSelma, thanks for the detailed appreciation. I started posting 2025 challenge a couple days late but I had written my responses, bits and pieces of them, in draft. Such baskets of appreciation keeps me going. And, I am pretty sure you will come up with beautiful poems too. I will remember your kind words, always.
DeleteYou bring them to life.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rosemary! Your comment means a lot.
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